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Here’s my entry for Friday Fictioneers where every week people get together to write 100 word stories in response to a picture prompt.
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And now, with no further ado, I present:
Vengeance Awaits
One day, you will regret what you have done to me.
First, you yanked me from my home and then you cracked me open to feast on my insides, on the sweet blood of innocents. Oh, the horrors, the indignity. May you be haunted by a thousand cavities.
Sugar rush. That is how I will punish you. I will make you pay and pay and pay and then….
I’m tired. Nap time.
Okay, but when you wake up I will be waiting.
Later that day….
“No more piñatas, honey. They give me the creeps.”
“Why?”
“They just do.”
………
Yes, pinatas scare me. I don’t know why.
Maybe it’s because pinatas could be secretly plotting revenge. Just saying.
Anne Higa 
I made a piñata chocolate cake a couple of weeks ago. Filled the hollow centre with m&m’s! Bet that wouldn’t have scared you!
Yeah, I could probably deal with that. 😉
I love this one and I do believe they could be plotting against us. Great job!
Thanks! And you never know… 🙂
Dear Anne, Your story is good – it’s sort of like those dolls that ventriloquists use and they scare me – and we have one – a Howdy Doody doll. Good story! Nan 🙂
Thanks Nan! And yeah, those dolls also creepy.
I’ve never been exposed to a piñata. I’m now I’m too scared 🙂
Mwahaha. Thanks. 🙂
Ha. Great story! I’ll never look at a piñata the same way again.
I wanted to let you know I nominated you for a Liebster Award. You can find the details here if you choose to accept: http://lorilmaclaughlin.com/2015/02/20/celebrate-the-small-things-and-the-liebster-award/
Have a great weekend!
Lori, thanks for dropping by and for the nomination. I’ll try to get back to you sometime this weekend, Monday at the latest.
No hurry. Whatever works for you. 🙂
I had never thought of pinatas that way. I used to make my own as a kid – they weren’t beautiful, but I knew exactly went into the creation, so I felt less bad about getting the candy out of them.
That’s a great story!
Tyrean, that sounds like fun! Thanks for visiting. Anne
You made me laugh so thank you for that. And thank you for making me aware of this potential pinata danger!
Thanks Michael. Glad to be of service. 🙂
Ah, the march of the pinatas. Time to run. Fun story.
Death by cavities sounds extremely painful! LOL. Ah well, it might all be worth it for joy of eating those piñatas.You played out this scene vey well – it kept me guessing for a while. Definitely a fun story. 🙂
Thanks Millie. Glad you enjoyed it!
It gave me a giggle. 🙂
I should not have read this so close to bedtime. I’m sure I’ll dream of rage-filled piñatas tonight! What a fun story 🙂
At least its not zombies 🙂 Thanks Sonya. Sweet dreams!
Dear Anne,
Thank you for the warm laughs on a cold morning.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hilarious. Another title could be, “When piñatas strike back” Love the cartoon too.
That revenge seems logical when looking at all the pinetas that have been broken into. Hilarious, Anne. Great cartoon.:D. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks Suzanne. Glad you liked it.
Ha! I love this, Anne. This is great. You had me going there for a bit. When you think about pinatas they are a little creepy. Here we are encouraging kids to whack something to bits!
Yeah, could be giving them the wrong idea.. =D Thanks Amy.