Friday Fictioneers: Vengeance Awaits

crystalsPHOTO PROMPT – © Copyright Marie Gail Stratford

Here’s my entry for Friday Fictioneers where every week people get together to write 100 word stories in response to a picture prompt.

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And now, with no further ado, I present:

Vengeance Awaits

One day, you will regret what you have done to me.

First, you yanked me from my home and then you cracked me open to feast on my insides, on the sweet blood of innocents. Oh, the horrors, the indignity. May you be haunted by a thousand cavities.

Sugar rush. That is how I will punish you. I will make you pay and pay and pay and then….

I’m tired. Nap time.

Okay, but when you wake up I will be waiting.

Later that day….

“No more piñatas, honey. They give me the creeps.”


“They just do.”


Yes, pinatas scare me. I don’t know why.


Maybe it’s because pinatas could be secretly plotting revenge. Just saying.

27 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Vengeance Awaits

  1. Dear Anne, Your story is good – it’s sort of like those dolls that ventriloquists use and they scare me – and we have one – a Howdy Doody doll. Good story! Nan 🙂

  2. I had never thought of pinatas that way. I used to make my own as a kid – they weren’t beautiful, but I knew exactly went into the creation, so I felt less bad about getting the candy out of them.
    That’s a great story!

  3. You made me laugh so thank you for that. And thank you for making me aware of this potential pinata danger!

  4. Death by cavities sounds extremely painful! LOL. Ah well, it might all be worth it for joy of eating those piñatas.You played out this scene vey well – it kept me guessing for a while. Definitely a fun story. 🙂

  5. Ha! I love this, Anne. This is great. You had me going there for a bit. When you think about pinatas they are a little creepy. Here we are encouraging kids to whack something to bits!

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